Rust

Rust, by Peter MacWhinnie
Final Rating: 54%
Information: It's metal and rust.

Comments

Posted by David Lanham (panel) at November 22, 2004 11:29 PM

Nice idea, the rust needs a bit more sharpness and color in it and some rust creeping onto the bg would be cool as well.

Posted by Daniel Goffin [panel] at November 24, 2004 07:59 PM

Yeah, good idea. The background tiles need a bit of work though - the tiling is too visible. The shelves don't look like rust to me, more like wood. I second Dave's comment.

Posted by Paul Armstrong at November 25, 2004 01:11 AM

The whole thing seems to have barely any depth, if at all. The shelves do look more like mahogany wood. Maybe would be better if the metal was sort of burnt out in just spots with the red/rust color?

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